tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5450424838277339646.post271717959023665894..comments2023-09-27T11:05:00.870-04:00Comments on Savvy Verse & Wit: Poem #1, PAD Challenge 2009Serenahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04745809545249574387noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5450424838277339646.post-66937131125108751522009-04-03T13:17:00.000-04:002009-04-03T13:17:00.000-04:00I hope I get back to it to revise it...but for now...I hope I get back to it to revise it...but for now and the rest of the month, it will be rough!Serenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04745809545249574387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5450424838277339646.post-51267899981489641502009-04-03T13:14:00.000-04:002009-04-03T13:14:00.000-04:00Great rough draft. I wonder what it will be like ...Great rough draft. I wonder what it will be like when you are done. To answer your question, I haven't written anything not tied to work. :(<BR/><BR/>--Anna<BR/><A HREF="http://diaryofaneccentric.blogspot.com/" REL="nofollow">Diary of an Eccentric</A>Annahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08046635675540466183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5450424838277339646.post-45780026870086746942009-04-03T11:56:00.000-04:002009-04-03T11:56:00.000-04:00Jenners and Nbbaker: I think you both should join...Jenners and Nbbaker: I think you both should join in the fun. I'm glad you are enjoying the poems...even if they are really rough.Serenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04745809545249574387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5450424838277339646.post-19274545375940647152009-04-03T11:43:00.000-04:002009-04-03T11:43:00.000-04:00You did create a vivid picture, here. Good job!You did create a vivid picture, here. Good job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5450424838277339646.post-55786631313719305312009-04-02T23:06:00.000-04:002009-04-02T23:06:00.000-04:00Wow! This had some great imagery in it. I really l...Wow! This had some great imagery in it. I really like what you did with this prompt. Great job.Jennershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08044537551139633301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5450424838277339646.post-56445617453692373432009-04-02T19:08:00.000-04:002009-04-02T19:08:00.000-04:00Kitten: I love cinquain and haiku poetry...those ...Kitten: I love cinquain and haiku poetry...those are the forms i adore...but I have a lot more free verse under my belt. I say give it a try and let me know if you post it.Serenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04745809545249574387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5450424838277339646.post-41017596523768949532009-04-02T17:55:00.000-04:002009-04-02T17:55:00.000-04:00I have to try this one. It's been a while since I...I have to try this one. It's been a while since I've written any poetry. Even the haiku well has run dry, and I can usually come up with those in a blink of an eye!Kittenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02387217950712644169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5450424838277339646.post-76231103091026387792009-04-02T12:20:00.000-04:002009-04-02T12:20:00.000-04:00Iliana: Thanks for checking out this rough draft....Iliana: Thanks for checking out this rough draft. I can't wait to get started on prompt #2 for today!Serenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04745809545249574387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5450424838277339646.post-65525069754944568752009-04-02T11:26:00.000-04:002009-04-02T11:26:00.000-04:00I really liked the first stanza in particular - yo...I really liked the first stanza in particular - you can just see this happening. You've used a lot of action words and those really work to set a tone.<BR/><BR/>Can't wait to see more!Ilianahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07026669671843769219noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5450424838277339646.post-60886428208208439892009-04-02T07:03:00.000-04:002009-04-02T07:03:00.000-04:00There will be more as the weeks go on. I really a...There will be more as the weeks go on. I really am enjoying this challenge and I hope to have a ton of rough drafts to work with.<BR/><BR/>Thanks for the compliments, ladies.Serenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04745809545249574387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5450424838277339646.post-21929800804221270222009-04-01T22:34:00.000-04:002009-04-01T22:34:00.000-04:00Excellent! I enjoyed it, thanks for sharing.Excellent! I enjoyed it, thanks for sharing.bethany (dreadlock girl)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02565178664993925800noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5450424838277339646.post-55213911816155128832009-04-01T22:28:00.000-04:002009-04-01T22:28:00.000-04:00Wow! I'm very impressed with your writing. Thank...Wow! I'm very impressed with your writing. Thanks for sharing with us.bermudaonionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10726401178972099557noreply@blogger.com