Apr 6, 2009

Poem #6, PAD Challenge 2009

Today's poem prompt is to write about something that is missing, whether that is a physical object, a feeling, or an idea. Here's my feeble attempt at this prompt:

Missing Something

There it is in your touch,
a slow burn on my skin
it trails down my neck and across my cheek.
It’s a love I cannot understand.
Slams into my supple cheek,
harsh as the morning light after a long night.
You say you love me,
caress me, press all the right buttons in bed.
But when I have things to do,
places to be, work to take care of,
it's a different story.
A story that takes a deep, heated turn
like the argument we have over the coffee.
It’s too strong, too bitter, and too burnt.

What did you write today?

For more information about the challenge, go here.


Iliana said...

Feeble attempt? Who are you kidding. Those last three lines especially make this poem work for me. Great job with the prompt.

Oh and off topic but I just gave you a little award :)

The Bookworm said...

great job serena.
I really like the last three lines too.

Serena said...

Ok, so the last three lines work and the rest is feeble! LOL

Serena said...

you guys are too sweet.

Anna said...

I think this is great! Feeble attempt? You don't give yourself enough credit.

Diary of an Eccentric

Serena said...

I sometimes think I am my harshest critic. maybe its true!

Becca said...

This is a great poem, Serena! My favorite so far.

Serena said...

Rebecca: I'm glad you enjoyed this poem.