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OK, Here's a poem up for reactions, interaction, and--dare I say it--analysis:
Remember, this is just for fun and is not meant to be stressful.
Keep in mind what Molly Peacock's books suggested. Look at a line, a stanza, sentences, and images; describe what you like or don't like; and offer an opinion. If you missed my review of her book, check it out here.
From Say Uncle by Kay Ryan:
Among English Verbs (page 52)
Among English verbs
to die is oddest in its
eagerness to be dead,
immodest in its
haste to be told--
a verb alchemical
in the head:
one speck of its gold
and a whole life's lead.
Let me know your thoughts, ideas, feelings, impressions. Let's have a great discussion...pick a line, pick an image, pick a sentence.
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9 comments:
I really like this one! I love words that sound like or evoke what they mean. This poem says it very well!
What's funny is I had no poem planned for this week and just started flipping through Ryan's book and found this one on accident. Love it.
I love the pun at the end! "Read" is a similar kind of word, you know--you can't tell if it's past or present tense from the spelling...
Jeanne: great observation. It would be cool to write about more of those past/present words.
I like this too! I've never thought of "to die" that way before.
This is definitely interesting.
I gave you a shoutout on my blog today.
http://debsbookbag.blogspot.com/2010/02/giveaway-saturday-8.html
I never thought of "to die" as eager, but I see her point. LOL
--Anna
Diary of an Eccentric
Among English verbs
to die is most arrogant
though it thinks itself bold,
its trace is a trickle
of the hope and despair
the signifier's signified
leaves in its stead.
I'm late to the party, but wanted to share my thoughts.
I like just about every individual line in this poem, but I don't like it as a whole. The rhyme scheme rubs me the wrong way and makes it seem trite.
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